Ok, that was a good try, but try to use the same Bledning on the whole drawing, and there are other details, like, the sword.. well it looks kind of blended, and is supose to be straigth. try not to use Filters, u used some on the grass.. avoid using them.. and if you use them, try to be very cearful on hideing them.
Other thing that you need to keep in mind is the proportion of the bodie, the hand is too small and the face looks weird, try doing sketches before you make your final drawing.. keep making sketches, and when you are happy with one, draw it again in a clean paper, this ones is the one you'll scann.. this way you cna have more control of some details.

Oh, and about your other drawings, hehe, quit drawing religious stuff hehe, no body believes that on this times

the arm could use some help... like the sword though...........

Thanks for your comments.
Pirexian: About the filters, I know that, I don't like to use just plain filters in my pics, I know they look unpro, but in these case, I made this drawing in a school class (that's about 40 mins) and I didn't draw a background, and the draw was more like a simple sketch (that's why you see some anatomy problems). Then someday I was boring at my house and decided to digital paint it.

I was going to publish it without the bg, but I prefered to make a simple background using some filters and trying to hiding them to save some time, but I think that bg is the best I could make in 20 mins

hey not a bad attempt - keep practicin' and u'll get it mastered - get some reference with anatomy (I used to use GI-Joes when I was a kid) - u might wanna get a magazine or something - not bad though

ummm.. how old are you? if you are over 12, then you might seriously want to think about giving up the whole art thing, or at least taking some classes. i don't mean to sound like a jerk, but maybe drawing just isn't your thing. also, your subject matter seems a little juvenile (video games and jesus and what have you)... just spend some time drawing what you SEE. take your time, and really examine things, look at the size and shape of objects and practice on whatever is around you, before you jump into big ambitious compositions (not that that is really what these are).

PNettles: I'm 20 years old and I love videogames and that doesn't mean Im not mature, I'll have 60 years and I will still love videogames.
You were very rude with your comments, you said drawing isn't my thing when all I hear from the people that knows me is the opposite thing. Please don't make comments like that, as I said there are some errors on this drawing ... i did it pretty fast on a school class and then decided to digital paint it, and to be honest I'm very out of practice because Its been long time without drawing. And by the way, I've seen ur drawings, and letme tell you.. those pics are not good, most of them are simple sketches.

I don't want to start a fight with you but please show some respect, even if my drawings were the worst of the world, you owe me respect!

And other thing, what's wrong with my Jesus draw, as an "artist" you should know that each person has its own mind, so please dont tellme what to draw.

hey, hey, I said i wasn't trying to sound like a jerk, I was actually trying to help, sorry if it came out rudely. everyone has the right to draw,and draw whatever they like, I was just saying you should probably spend a little time practicing on real objects. it will give you a better understanding of spacial relationships, and how things actually look, if you want to make things look a more realistic and interesting. as for the stuff i have on here, sure it is mostly just stuff I threw together in short amounts of time, and I'm not here to defend it. I'm not a professional but I just thought I would try to give you a few pointers, sorry if they weren't appreciated.

hey pnettles, don't appologize, this guy sucks!

Pnettles: ok, no problem, and sorry for my rude comments too, I really don't like to talk sh** about other art, since all people is trying to do their best... and thanks for your comments.

Lobsty: .....

Come on guys don't fight, probably the draw sucks. and it's true. but. maybe he can do better things. and the draw was a little try on drawing..

but heyy how can i upload my work. i tryed to do it. but i don't what happened.

I know this is really old but I felt like commenting anyway...

Bass, I think you need to work on your art skills a bit more. It needs smoothing out and a more texture. His clothes look very stiff, kinda painted on (no pun intendid), and his hair definitely needs more detail. Instead of drawing the outline and then coloring it like a coloring book, try more to draw with the colors. Sorry, I'm not the best with giving advice...

As far as what pirexian said...well, plenty of people believe in that "religious" stuff, so keep it up, just try and be good at it

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 pnettles wrote on 02/24 @963 also, your subject matter seems a little juvenile (video games and jesus and what have you)...

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Erm...what about Michelangelo? Don't tell me he was juvenile... if someone believes strongly in something I don't see why they shouldn't express that in what they do. Now, whether or not they express it well is a whole other story... even the best subject matter can be mutilated by a crappy artist.
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Erm...what about Michelangelo? Don't tell me he was juvenile... if someone believes strongly in something I don't see why they shouldn't express that in what they do. Now, whether or not they express it well is a whole other story... even the best subject matter can be mutilated by a crappy artist.

Thanks Azriel